you are very clever.
voice acting... sha... you are a writer mate! your voice in this was not all good. the accent needed more work.
also throughout the entire series i have heard. I can detect you are being quiet. is someone asleep downstairs or something? you can not give effective voice acting without volume control and emotion. i think you really need to consider not caring if your parents hear you downstairs.
last tip too. to VA is to Act. you are not a voice actor. you are an actor. using your voice. it DOES help to express all of the facial expressions your character would on screen. be very clear about the words you say... slurrs and breaks are bad unless intentional.
YOUR MIC quality is absolutely spot on.
if you are confident about giving me a powerful and original performance. you are in my animation. :D:D:D
well done. i am impressed.