Not perfect but I very nice composition. It's really inspiring and like NIghtwolf said, I can picture this in a dramatic moment in any RPG.
The interpretation feels a little bit mechanical, but it's very nice.
Keep it up!
This could easily be a Hit for any dramatic or environmental Cutscene in an RPG. I'd prefer the second one, i can imagine a tracking shot over some green Woods.
I also like the Way it grows into it's climax and then slowly winds down to the last note.
Wonderful written, i like it pretty much. =)
Please contact me if you would like to use this in a project. We can discuss the details.