Ehm... it's very abstract... Good job doing that I guess... But if you wanted to make a song, you failed in my opinion. It misses nearly everything that makes a song into a song, like a flow throughout the song. A returning melody... And the samples u use are pretty crappy. Well thats my opinion. Hope you can do something with it.
I've also noticed that absense of continuity, of flow. I'm going to try and work on that.
I didn't use any samples, however. Every note was composed by myself, just using the mentioned instruments. If you find it crappy, then that means you find my composing crappy. Which is okay, everyone is entitled to their own opinion.
Anyway, your review's learnt me that some continuity would be welcome. Thanks, I'll keep it in mind.