"Trancemission" HA! That's cute.
I like the beginning, but it doesn't really flow very well into 0:38, it just sounds like you stuck the two parts together.
From my experience with trance music, it's supposed to flow seemingly from section to section.. and in places it sounds like you're sticking loops together, I can hear slight pauses and breaks.. something doesn't mix right.
I hate to ask but, fruityloops?
It's all a bit up in the air too, I think it could do with a bit more depth to it.
And more emotion, trance is all about how it makes you feel.. this feels more like a house track when it 'breaks'.. not sure if I'd call it that, either.
I like your synths, they're good, your general chord progressions melodies and harmonies are alright, it's just the structure and texture I'm not fond of.
you might like trancebass better than this one... also look @ crimson sun aswell please.