Fudge the Course
This song has a lot going for it, but a lot to improve on.
First and foremost, the base tune is really good. The parallel problem is how it's a repetitious tune. Keep in mind, sometimes it's better to make a song shorter. (Think about it - you might love a video game, but after playing it 50 times, it gets old.) I did notice you tried to spice it up - and some of those parts are really good. More of that, and you would have the song down better.
I also noticed a break at 2:53 - the sudden twist makes the song take a 360 - breaking the focus. Something similar happens at 3:00. If you could make is smoother, it would be better.
The song is really cool - I would approve of this song getting into a Megaman or Fighter game. It has a lot to improve on, but a lot of guns. Keep on playing!
"Talent is something born with. Skill is earned. If you asked me which I would want more, I would choose Skill." - Some famous composer
Pretty cool man, my only problem is that it does get a bit repetitive, as most of this music does, but I see that you have tried to lessen the repetiveness.
The intro build-up wasn't really spectaculer so that could be changed to be better.
For something made in 30 minutes, however, this is pretty cool and not bad at all so I hope to see more of your stuff in the future!
~Happy Music Making -Squll
hey thanks man
u will c more from me
Can u also check out my other 1 called Crimson Sun please?
...And review it.................