Hmmm

Well, first of all, not bad for a beginner dude!
There are alot of things u can work on though..
- The beat, try other samples and changes in beat
- the piano, try to add some fx
- try a bassline:D especialy when its trance
- watch out for the clipping put the master volume down by 2 DB
- Dont use the snares to much..

Its good for a beginner, but there are lots of things u can work on to get better:D
Try to mark some transitions and dont do that thing with these kicks, its annoying sorreh:P
Denn-C

8/10
5/5 ;-)
Keep it up;)