The ambiance simply does not mix well with the guitar and drums. I don't think it would be solid enough if all guitar was removed without something substituted to achieve more solidity. Still, what you have is pretty good.
B | What cetwing said.
If the guitar was completely removed, and I mean every single reference to a guitar, this would be an excellent song. The drums and ambiance would let this go along with a war game any day.
Not that I think about it. The few DUH-NUH parts with the drive sound alright, but the overlaying sound ruins it.
this has potential. i really like the ambience floating around in the back, but the guitar synth kills this song for me. IMO it would sound better if you took a clearer instrument (even one of the "bass" presets and put the blood overdrive over that.