best song i heard today. great work
Thank you :)
Definite improvement, although I thought it couldn't have been better.
Love it! :D
Thank you, I feel like there's always room for improvement in all my songs. But I am relatively satisfied with the way this one sounds now. Thanks for the feedback :)
love your music my friends do too, now even they go on newgrounds becuze of ur inspiring music haha good job bro %u2665
Thanks for showing your friends my work! :)
the beat was fantastic
the lyrics are amazing
the voice was a little off
and there was a line were the syllables didnt match the previous
I still like this song very much.
dont mean to criticize your work tho.
Thanks for the review :)
Instantly my favorite of your songs. You did a great job on the instrumental part and very thought -out lyrics that match the beat of the song. Your good.
Actually these lyrics were some of the least thought out of my songs. I took them from a journal that I vented in so they are as real as the sun. lol Usually a song's lyrics have to be somewhat fake for the sake of just going with the theme of the song, but these were true to their "word". lol
Please contact me if you would like to use this in a project. We can discuss the details.