Again, like your other song, it had awesome aspects, and annoying aspects.
First off the things I didn't like or find annoying.
-I Found the very high synth that drifted in and out in the first minute or so incredibly annoying.
-The synth at like 1:25 needs to be louder, to add more effect.
-The synth that comes in briefly at 1:45 has some weird notes.
-The Weeh synth that comes in at 2:10ish is quite irrating, mabye an octave lower would be better.
Things I liked
-The trance synth in the background was awesome.
-The hihat sounded pretty cool throughout the songs.
-The low frequency synths were really cool.
Things to Work on in the future
I noticed in your other song, you used a snare roll at the intro of your song as well, also try a kick roll sometimes they sound really good (as in like 1 note per bar, then 2 notes, then 4, then 8, then 16) is a really good kick build up sometimes.
~Hope to see some more of your groovy work in the future!
~Happy Music Making -Squll
PS: What did you use to get that voice?
Do ypu have msn so i can contant y0u?