But I didn't like really any of the song. I guess it might just be me, but all the instruments don't quite fit with each other. I didn't care for this, but work more on your melodies, not your little drum parts.
while i was listening to this i couldn't think of a single word to throw because that higher pitch 8 note string just killed all thought for words. but it would be a good loop for the menu screen of some game or preloader.