Another song bites the dust
I like t his, but 3 votes amd that brought it down to like a 1. something. thats bs. this is good.
Not bad, but could be better
Okay, you've got the basic tune through, but to me it sounds very 'thin'. It needs more varied notes and that repetitive beat needs to change as well. Meh, if what I'm saying makes no sense at all then nevermind, I don't compose music myself so I don't know the lingo :/ Anyway, it's off to a good start and I'm sure the finished version will pull together nicely :)
thanks for some good construtive crit i'll try add a little more!
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