Not the best

too much drums and too much slayer. The notes are the same things and it's a very bad mix of techno and heavy metal. Your doing better than my first attempt with slayer. Keep trying and you'll get there if you still use your account.

Be careful...

Using Slayer can be interesting when used well. I think you are going in the right direction, however, I would suggest using a multiband compressor, a filter, and maybe some other effects over Slayer so that the guitar doesn't sound so bland. Also, some lead riffs would be nice. I'm currently working on a Slayer jam myself, it's no where near completion yet buy check it out if you would like.