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Mar 17, 2009 | 5:06 PM EDT
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2.8 MB
3 min 3 sec
3.43 / 5.00

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Rated 3.43 / 5 stars
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Author Comments

Ok, well this is my second post but in reality this was the first song I ever wrote... It was again recorded with a 6 dollar computer mic but don't let that stop you from listening. I personaly think it has great quality with that cheap of a mic, but thats just me... So please rate and comment and tell me what I could do better... Thanks for listening...



Rated 4 / 5 stars

Lovely sounds.

The beauty bumps your score a tad. :) You should have someone sing your lyrics for you. Make it a contest or something: 'Who wants to sing my song!!!" Haha :)
There are always singers looking for something to sing if they don't write or have taken a break and just want to sing..!
Lol I sing, but my problem is putting my music to my lyrics, and my lyrics to my voice.. so that's why I haven't sung anything of mine xD
It does sound warm and sweet. Fuzzy, but fixable. :)

Defiance09 responds:

Yeah I know, This is one of the songs that My band is putting on our demo Cd... and I just want to know if I should put the vocals on the Cd or not... but if you ever need anyone to play some music for you, I'm up for it... also the fuzzyness is due to it only being a 6 dollar computer mic... and since I'm broke and lazy, I'm not getting a new one anytime soon lol...


Rated 5 / 5 stars

Enjoyed this

You have really captured the essence and feelin of looking at a star filled sky... As chaoticstyle wrote, you should write some lyrics and add some vocals to this. That would make it complete, if you know what I mean ?
10 / 10
5 / 5 3.39 / 5.00 (+ 0.48)

Roc A Lot

Defiance09 responds:

Thank you Very much for the positive comment... I am glad that you enjoyed it... This is a big confidence boost for me considering I always thought that my songs sucked... but that probably has something to do with every artist felling that people won't like their stuff... but thanks


Rated 3.5 / 5 stars

good but

i have been playing acoustic for like ever. haha but it was good but ur transitions are a tad off. did u try to like layer it?. if so good try but i like the main riff. the layer jsut sounds liek out of place. u should trying making some lyrics ^_^

Defiance09 responds:

Yeah the transitions are one thing I have been working on... I actualy recorded this about 6 months ago when I had no idea what I was doing with the program I was using... And I do have lyrics for it... but as I said I am no singer... Thanks man for listening I appreciate it.