Nice song overall.
You could like
Mix this with All Around the World.
That would be unreal.
Hey again Drkdragon! I like your idea i never thought of that! But i dont think the songs would mix very well because of there difference in atmospheres, but i could always try! Thx for the idea and your review!
It sounds good, only thing that bothers me is that in your profile is an image of some cd-case which has EJay-logo. So in order you use EJay I really should vote originality to 0 since you can't make anything original in EJay. If im wrong, sorry about that.
hey there xBlanksterx! Umm yes i do have an ejay logo on the picture in my profile, thats is a picture i made and i added the logo. Also this song is made almost entirely of ejay samples, i only imported 2 samples. All of my songs are made with the ejay program.
anyway thx for your review!
The break was so smooth that it felt like an ending, and the fact that the pick-up had nothing to do with the previously heard tune, it seemed like another song had started. Not good.
Also, you had good energy at the beginning of the song, but you lacked enough variation in the beat and rhythm (could hardly hear the bass), that it sort of died, even before the break.
Don't put vocals in just because you want vocals... and don't base an entire song on one sample, especially when it's weak. If either of those is what you did - yeah, don't. If not, just realize that's sort of what it seemed like.
Keep it up. :)
HEY JPhoenix84! First of all thx for reviewing! For this song i wanted to try a somethi9ng a little different. I agree it does sound like 2 songs at some points. Another thing is that i didnt ust put vocasl in cause i wanted them, i thought they fit well and i built them around the song, i didnt just slap them on and pressed play. Anyway thx for your review!
i like it it's a nice song.
THX! I like your review its a nice review.