simple chords, but sounds relaxing! i'm guitarist and i hear some mistakes, but i can't say it was bad, but also can't say it was great! i'm eighteen, and my opinion about this songs is: "this song is great for people after 30-35 years old".
try to sing it withot fear in your voice and add some drums and bass, maybe some simple solo. ANYWAY! play punk and alternative rock!
excuse me for every grammar and lexican mistake i made!
yeah, i need to get my fear out >.> im not THE BEST but im pretty cool..
Please contact me if you would like to use this in a project. We can discuss the details.