The beginning is very cool! Too bad the synth just kills the vibe... Maybe it doesnt do that when you let the piano play the whole song. Otherwise i'd say... take the intro and make it into something else! Dunno, maybe a sort of classical themed song...
Sounds like a sorta cut scene, or slow bit where suddenly the action bursts through your door!
I don't have much constructive criticism, because it is really quite good, and I ain't looking at this with judging eye.
It could be something for a gnomish area but nothing more. I just didn't think that the sounds harmonized into a single smooth song. I don't know, sorry I wish I could give you more constructive feed back but this all I could think of. Good Luck to you in the future.
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