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Sucker For Your Smile

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Hello NG,

EBunni's debut piece, still a WIP (needs to be mastered, etc). Hopefully the finished piece will be out sometime in April. Comments welcome, but please, it's EBunni's first piece.

Thanks =]

LYRICS:
Hello.
You got my attention
I keep taking glances at you

Now what is this
My body is tingling
It just doesn't know how to stop

Did you know
My heart melts everytime you gimme that face

[Hook]
(And) o please don't
Don't look my way
You just might catch me
Looking at your
Your pretty brown eyes
And is it just me?
Or did the sky brighten
Cause of your shining smile

[chorus]
(Oh) S is for when my heart sings whenever I see you smiling
M is for your lovely moon-shaped eyes
I~ I love the way your dimples glow
(and) L is la la la
(and ) E is each and every day
I become a sucker for your smile

Could you be
Just another of them
Them who always play games

I wonder
What thoughts go on behind
In that pretty face of yours

Your thoughts
I'm sure there are many thoughts comprised

[hook]

[chorus]

Stitched up
I can't find the courage
to say that I'm interested in you
I can't admit
A simple thing it is
Just waiting
Bottling up my love

[hook]

[chorus]
A sucker for your smile.

Reviews


not perfect, but has TONS of potential

This is totally like the next hit pop song. You should seriously seek out a studio, perfect the lovely voice that you have produce a single. Really excellent.



I love ya voice

nice voice and ur skills on teh piano are great :D good job :P



well

perhaps it's time for a decent microphone?

and if I may be so bold, I'd try:
a nice beat and bassline with a program like cubase...
maybe a more volume in your voice
a little less staccato piano playing

right now it feels a bit like a sketch for a real song, but not a bad sketch at all ;)



OMG!

Wow... Omg... I don't say that much, but it seemed like the appropriate response for this! The onlu reason I didn't rate it 10 is because I agree with elmepo that your voice was a bit drowned out by the piano, other than that, fantastic! :)


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Xiratava
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Listens
4,939
Downloads
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Votes
234
Score
3.94 / 5.00

Uploaded
Mar 16, 2009
10:33 PM EDT
Genre
Pop
File Info
Song
3.7 MB
4 min 5 sec

Licensing Terms

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