not perfect, but has TONS of potential
This is totally like the next hit pop song. You should seriously seek out a studio, perfect the lovely voice that you have produce a single. Really excellent.
I love ya voice
nice voice and ur skills on teh piano are great :D good job :P
perhaps it's time for a decent microphone?
and if I may be so bold, I'd try:
a nice beat and bassline with a program like cubase...
maybe a more volume in your voice
a little less staccato piano playing
right now it feels a bit like a sketch for a real song, but not a bad sketch at all ;)
Wow... Omg... I don't say that much, but it seemed like the appropriate response for this! The onlu reason I didn't rate it 10 is because I agree with elmepo that your voice was a bit drowned out by the piano, other than that, fantastic! :)
Can I Ask You Something?
Are you playing the piano? multi-talent that's good
Please contact me if you would like to use this in a project. We can discuss the details.