this isnt bad but it could use some vocals! also sounds like it was done on a synth machine. the synth machine sound is ok for your drum and bass line but you need to get a good electric guitar in there and this would be a great song!
All my stuff is made in Guitar pro and then I choose an RSE effect and record as an mp3. This is quite peculiar compared to most of my other stuff, the bass guitar changes over 3 octaves, I agree I could probably have done more with this if I'd have thought it through enough.
Thanks for the review.