Very solid piece of work. I think the intro was perhaps a touch overlong. Other than that, well done.
I think I'm going to remove this version and make some amendments to it... I hate my relationship with my music... I make something in one night that I think is cool... but then I start to hate it, the more I think about it.... I need to fix the flaws in the solos... make them more interesting.... and I'll try to shorten the whole thing overall... especially the intro.
Please contact me if you would like to use this in a project. We can discuss the details.