i give you credit for trying but this piece lacks fluidity and and an interesting tune. maybe try to change it up a little more? im not sure what else you could do but i think this song does have potential
WAy better considering that this a fav in the game..I used to be so into that game.Good job anyways. :D
Much better than the original
Eh for trying......
But noo, Really......no. We don't need to reminded by that game. Though I give you credit for getting it close to it. Though not the right sounds.
buy a tampon.
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