Holy S@*T! 10/10
Wow. I am really impressed with this track. It's dark and creepy and mean. Bumping you above my submission in honor of your mastery of all that is badass.
Perfect. I love these industrial noises the song starts with, the calm and relaxing drums that fade in and the transition to the guitar, which is placed exactly on the only place where it fits perfectly. Could be much longer without becoming boring, the gloomyness takes me far away to fantastic places. Constructive criticism: Keep it just like that. You have it down pat.