Change it up.
Overall I'd have to say this piece is boring and tiring. I can somewhat relate to the production of this song because I made similar songs when I first began writing music. The biggest problem is that there is no diversity within the piece and that there is no change in there. You don't necessarily need a defined melody, but you should work on picking a variety of instruments and making more diverse sounding parts, which would in turn add greater quality and make the piece entertaining for listeners. One thing that could help is changng up the drum beats more. If you're not good with them, that's fine, changing doesn't mean over complicating them.
I'm not discouraging you from making music. I encourage improvement. If you haven't learned basic music theory, I would strongly recommend it. It's not a necessity in music production, but it does help.
Hope I was able to help. :)
Thanks for the insight! ^_^ I'll try what I can to upgrade this piece!