Thx for the feedback! Even if it's not long, it still tells me that people are dig'in my stuff!
Intricate and Snappy
Definitely finish this up! You might make the build up longer because you get a bunch of complicated melodic ideas out really quickly - I'd like to hear the texture build up slower one voice at a time so that my ear can follow everything. I was rocking out after it got going though. Looking forward to hearing the full version.
Thank you so much for the quick feedback! Your opinion might have just saved this song from my recycle bin. I'll do my best to accomplish what you had in mind with the buildup. This song right now is bare bones. It's a skeleton of a song, like how EJay works. Lots of work ahead. Still could use any feedback from everyone!