Mr. Big Bad incinerates fonie mosie corpse.
Love the tone
You set a tone with this one and it comes alive with the lyrics all though the lyrics seem like they could be better the background sounds is spot on and connects from key to key so all I will say is more lyric quality changes but not by much
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Lyrics are good but would love more deeper sounds
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eheheh
WHY CAN'T I BE YOU!!!!!
I tried everything, but I is just fail! xp
Lol, any ways, stupid shit aside, this shit was pretty dope!! I was pleasantly surprised!! Most rappers on NG are weak.
R.I.P Lejin
Looks like you failed at that too cuz noone's mad. Be serious.. why would anybody want to be you?
-A pussy who's scared to show his face
-A 24 year old with no lyrical material
-A 24 year old with no talent in music
-A 24 year old with no originality
-A 24 year old who plays World of warcraft
-A 24 year old who try's to act black (who's obviously white)
-A 24 year old who pretends to be in a gang
-A 24 year old who stalks people
and here's my favorite one
-A 24 year old who talks to himself
God damn. I got a list for yea mayne and I can keep going and all you can do is make up some bullshit ass rumors & spread a bunch of lies. The truth's the truth kid.. That's why people ain't feeling yea music.. and that's pretty sad cuz it's ng
Your music sucks so bad that I don't even bother giving your voice a chance anymore mayne. All your songs sound the same. So I don't bother hittin' the "play" button with you (It's been like that ever since I released Where Yea Address At). So if you ever thought I've been keeping up to date with your music and listening to your work, I guess I can tell you now, your thought was wrong (and it's not like i ever listened to your music anyways). And when I say this last statement, I speak for many when I say this.. You can't rap.
P.S. I must say, Ever since you & cajete been hearing me say kid. Ya'll been overusing that term alot, and it ain't like ya'll say that on a regular basis. Maybe I should be telling you.. "U aint me" swagga jacker. hahaa
keep sending them 0's yo, I need more. lol like i give a fuck bout a ng score bruh. i aint like these ng cats.. i dont vote myself up everyday. I do me & get respect regardless. Here's something you need to learn for yourself Lejin. You can't force respect, You gotta earn it. So all these alt accounts you got trying to give you a 10 after someone gives your song a true rating.. Your only lying to yourself. And if you can't be true with yourself then damn.. You ain't gonna make it far in life.. especially at the age you are now
-RMP
+NO RESPECT+ :)
Looks like your still furious and failing at hiding it with your fading denial that we all see through. If you werent upset then what other enotion could motivate you to drop an essay? Anger? Face reality you fucking washed up worthless failure. You will never be me. You will always be the little broke make up wearing cross dresser Git Maaaaaaaaad~LOL
-A pussy who who wears his mothers make up
-A 16 year old with no lyrical material
-A 16 year old with no talent in music
-A 16 year old with no originality
-A 16 year old who got G checked and exposed by Ventrillo warcraft geeks
-A 16 year old who wants to be a gangster online(But refuses to meet anyone)
-A 16 year old lieing to himself into thinking he has not bin more than murdered.
-A 16 year old who stalks people on the internet using a simple google search.
-A 16 year old who gets no radioplay.
-A 16 year old who has no fans
-A 16 year old who has no money
-A 16 year old who thought he had his internet gang fooled about making 6Geez
-A 16 year old who is a racist and calls successful mega hit superstars "white"
-A 16 year old thats afraid to give out his address while sending threats online.
-A 16 year old who steals from his mother.
-A 16 year old who steals lines from NG stars like BrokenNeedle and Lejin.
-A 16 year old who with the intelligence level of a jamaican brain-fart.
-A 16 year old who suffered a nervous meltdown in a room full of angry nerds.
-A 16 year old who has no chance at making it in the music business.
-A 16 year old who failed at getting respect on Hip Hop NG from everyone.
-A 16 year old who hates Mr Big Bad Lejin(Hip Hop NG's #1 artist)
-A 16 year old who feels frustrated because no one stops making fun of him.
-A 16 year old who types essays on song reviews to feel a sense of revenge.
-A 16 year old who who has no hoes.
-A 16 year old who's internet gang turned against him when exposed.
-A 16 year old who runs from reality and tricks himself with denial.
-A 16 year old who who blocked everyone on NG.
-A 16 year old who is scared of a gae churchboy in skinny jeans.
-A 16 year old who will never amount to anything in his sad little lonely life.
-A 16 year old who has no cars.
-A 16 year old who used a voice changer to try concealing that chipmunk voice.
-A 16 year old who drinks so much denial that you suffer from amnesia.
-A 16 year old who cant rap.
-A 16 year old who cant compose music.
-A 16 year old who fails consistently at hip hop.
-A 16 year old who doesn;t know what a Dj is
and here's my favorite one:
-A 16 year old Keyboard Gangster who's sad little life is so lonely that he is forced feed on denial pills in order to function daily and hopefully sleep better at night in order to ignore/block everyone else out of your anti social sad little life who give you absolutely NO RESPECT+ :).
If there was a title for 'most humiliated/exposed lonely person on the planet'... That person would you Phonie Mosie.
Me and Cajete's question remains the very same:
Why yea Block me for? Why did you block everyone for? what are you afraid of? The truth that finished you in the first place? Recordings don't lie Dj StrEsSed.
Your music sucks so bad that people tell me you dont even score a "1" anymore...<<BANG>>KO!!!
Deep down im that n***a that you HATE to LOVE. Cause i am Hip Hop NG's #1 Rap Star who you formerly reviewd the following:
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TheEyeOfMusiK
"ROFL!!!!!!!!!!"
by: TheEyeOfMusiK
date: July 31, 2007
THIS IS AMAZING!!! I LUV UR FLOW!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! KEEP IT UP BRUH.
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P.S. Everyone knows 'U aint me' you swaggaless pissed off Keyboard gangster banging on that keyboard. No one even gives your todler voice a chance anymore so maybe you should go back to using the voice changer to attempt to sound like a killer. LMFAO!!!
And when I say this last statement, I speak for 'ALL' when I say this..
RIP rmp 2007-2007
The truth hurts, Pop a painpill.(Denial Pills)
6 because of the irritating rap
Upload another version without the rap, it's very annoying. Like, the reverb/echo whatever at the start was a bad effect. The way you were rapping was bad, like the tone and the way you chanted, it was infuriating. Especially the part near the end, sounded like someone was having a seizure, work on that. The lyrics were also bad, too generic, nothing poetic, nothing entertaining. Work on that too. And the kids cheering at the beginning, take it out, it's odd.
Now, the music was fine, if not it was great, so if the music was done by you I'd strongly suggest uploading a lyricless version.
All I have to say, and no this is not a diss.
The sole purpose of this 'is' to keep someone angry. If you want to get emotional then please by all means, please do ^_^
the truth hurts.
Go ahead and get mad =D
- Mr Big Bad Lejin (Hip Hop NG's #1 Artist)
sorry bou the late rev.
but ive been busy u know skool is on a break and u know i smoke that shit, now i hav a better reason to smoke even more then i do.
but yo the quality is better then ur older songs i mean uve gotten the volume levels aiite, like the mixing of volumes between beat and the vocals sometimes u had the vocals too loud now its aiite its really quality and good flow like allways u have a grreat flow on those faster more tempo beats.
about the beef, its getting boring mayne im just givin u a piece of my mind man, drop the war spawn effect man im sayng this out loud. u know all u do is songs about foney mose and war spawn and if u wanna be a good entertainer u wont put the headlines news on the front page of the paper for 3 months ppl get tired of it u really need something bigger and better to rap bout then those washed up keyboard gangsters man, i mean theyre all a big piece of shit and, u wouldnt rap bout pieces of shit would u? i mean tont touch shit it will stink, leave those pieces of shit ALOOONNEEEEE. i dont wanna smell shit erryday i log into newgrounds and i have another emo letter from warspawn. fuckin paranoid bitch war spawn.
peace
Interesting. Very good point but you gotta admit. The emo warPAWN letters are always great to log in for XD
Please contact me if you would like to use this in a project. We can discuss the details.
Lejin 
