(sky) Battleship

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Well this is another song i did out of just bordom.

i was playing aroundo n the keyboard and found some cool chords so i put that in there.

and then the ending was kind of cool. but personaly i dont enjoy the lead up to the beggening. it's just one of my melodeys that i put somewhere when i dont know what to put.




nice start off!

That really brings in the touchy feel-the siren! love it! like from a game love it!


Hi Sky,

This is a little difficult for what I should say. You made this out of boredom so I'm assuming you did not put much effort in this. I don't want to say stuff that you already know. I'll give you a more in depth review in the songs where you tried your best. As for this song, the past reviewers pretty much laid out the cons. One additional comment I want to make is that I'm noticing you are relying too much on delay/reverb. Its good, but I think the crazy panning is tricking you into thinking the instrument sounds amazing. Before you add all this special effects to your instrument, make the song with no effects. If your finding the song not too eventful then work more on the instrument. Once it sounds good, then add in the special fx stuff and you will be amazed by how good it sounds. Plus listen to your song at a very quiet volume. Listening to a song loudly can trick you into thinking the song is better then it really is. If your grooving to the beat at a low volume then you got yourself a real good song. 9/10 and 5/5 vote

Bye for now

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Skylence responds:

Hmm next time ill try that thing that you said about the "make song without effects".

i think you might be on to something

Good...not great

Siren was an interesting lead-in. Too much plain bass afterwards however, with a jerky transition into the next part. The two combined wonderfully though and provided a wonderful basis for the main part of the song. I liked how every part of it was based upon the preceding part but when left on its own, was able to be a separate entity.

lacks something... cohesiveness perhaps?

Skylence responds:

I think what you thinks it was lacking was effort. Your right, the transitions were way to suddle. And another thing is this with the person below, it needs some backround noise just to fill it out like an arp or a sturdy bassline.

Thanks for review =]

Pretty Good

Def. needs some more volume thou, bass... "Background noise" but over all pretty sweet :)

Skylence responds:

mmk ill think about trying to add some bass or maybe even a sub-melody or backround arp. =]

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4.22 / 5.00

Mar 12, 2009
12:21 AM EDT
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3.4 MB
2 min 59 sec

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