Difference here between enjoyable and not.
For this song you are thinking of making, if this is the buildup (beginning progression) of the song, then it sounds like this song may come out quite well. On the other paw, if this is how the main part of the song it, not going to work very well as a successful song, unless you add some music, which will probably change it to a techno trance. The loop itself is a good calm but livened trance loop. Good job. You get a Jolly Rancher.