Nice job there mate!

some things

---00:00 - 00:53: this whole area of the intro felt really empty, with not enough bass.
00:01 - 00:15: I didnt like the lowpass filter right here, felt abit empty you know?
00:16 - 00:30: The sudden bass on the kick was quite pleasing to the ears, but it cost abit of emptyness in 00:01 - 00:15.
00:31 - 00:53: The bass coming in here fitted well, but it still needed something!
other than that, the acid make it pretty good :)
00:55 - 01:17ish No offense, but i think you got sloppy here, it was way to sudden, take of the kick in that area and fade it in slowly with a snareroll.

Well, everything else was pretty good, loved the melody, lead, piano tune, i was sitting in a pool of pure musical joy!
great job, intro is the only thing you need to work on.
5/5
10/10

Not Quite there...

The piano melody didn't work but the rest was FUCKING AMAZING!

Heh

A bit amusing style but no revolution not soulfull too

Awesome...

You know it seems that all the gems of trance section(most cases) are not found in the top but burried deep in the sands of audio portal. This trance song is absolutely awesome. Just the way i like it, soft syncs, orgasmic build up and ..i mean what else can i say. The quality is excelent. Well its only three minutes..thats the minus side but meh. Doesnt matter. Still awesome.
Trance4life. keep it up!
PS: Shameless self adverticing, check out my song, rate and review if you so wish

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Great to hear some more 'real world' sounding trance on this site. I'll just give you some points I think you can improve on though.

The supersaw drop in felt too sudden, I think it could've been teased a bit more before full sound of it dropped in until that amazing breakdown. The song's quite short for a trance song, it was over before I could properly get into it, could've been stretched out more.

The supersaw sounds a bit tinny, I can hear that it had lower frequencies in it but has been hi passed, you should probably allow more mid and lower frequencies in to get a more louder and fuller sound from it.

The kick, offbeat hat and crash sound a bit basic, they sound like samples used in trance songs in the 90s and early 2000s, the kick could be more punchy and have more thump or click in the higher end and the crash was too dry, it could have more reverb to emphasize a bigger impact.

5/5, 9/10