after reading your response, i decided to start looking into your music. and sure enough you do have a lot of music thats much more worthy to be number 1. such as this piece right here, or blood moon. your piano pieces are pretty good. expect a review on both.
now for the song review, it does sound off beat at around 0:27. and around 1:29
and the song has a very abrupt ending. like it was bringing you up to get to a chorus or a bridge but it just faded out. but i did like how all the sounds fit very nicely together. and it flowed and was dynamic. now i can't give you a 10/10, since that'd suggest the piece is perfect, when it isn't. but i will give you a 5/5. you deserve it:D