It's Alright
I don't like the flow much.. Decent lyrics though.
Rappin' on JoeyKeys' track "Just Noise" Hope you guys enjoy.
Chorus x2
When it comes time to live ya life
Remember these lines and ya just might
Stand a fightin' chance in the real world...
Pave ya own way, take a second glance
No I'm never hesitant...
So they say that time heals all wounds
So I guess that's today makin' headline news
I knew I'd get mine dude as I push on through
Droppin' school for my pay, never playin' by the rules
And though all the schoolyard fights excite,
They know who's hard but who the hell am I
So crude in my mind thinkin' my way is right
But I was just a fool to this light in my sights
So high on myself I'm so damn cool
On my shelf in the sky lookin' down on these fools
Never stood to my tools 'cus y'know what they do
Carvin' statues outta all of you as my flow's fillin' up the pool
So try and reach mine, I demand to ask why
When I can fight these guys down with my shifty eyes
And walk on by the land on the other side
And plan mansions in the sand with clear blue skies
Chorus x2
When it comes time to live ya life
Remember these lines and ya just might
Stand a fightin' chance in the real world...
Pave ya own way, take a second glance
No I'm never hesitant...
I'm enhancin' life like a plant in the sunlight
I'm advancin' runnin' twice my normal strides
To a second chance past the fuckin' rat race
I'm tryin' to dance n' have fun right, just in case
Some dumb mother fucker comes and scratches out my face
For crumbs that they covet out the patches in my jeans for a taste
Of somethin' other than bullets, screamin' blastin' at ya place
I'm outlastin' other bastards, believin' in another way...
So what'ya say?
Change the days and the words that we say
And stir up a ray of hope in the verses that I spoke
And choke out the phase of ya fake cursed plays
I'm the star of the show and I'm fuckin' here to stay
So what'ya say...?
So what'ya say...?!
Change the days and put ya brittle hands to pray
I'm Sick of playin' all these little kid games today
So what'ya say...?
So what'ya say?!
Chorus x2
When it comes time to live ya life
Remember these lines and ya just might
Stand a fightin' chance in the real world...
Pave ya own way, take a second glance
No I'm never hesitant...
It's Alright
I don't like the flow much.. Decent lyrics though.
Shits hott
I think you need to eq the vocals a bit, and turn down your vocals. Other than that.
it's hott.
5/5
Yeah I plan on equalizing everything before I press my tracks on a cd. Thanks again for lettin' me hit this track up man.
Easily your best
This is by far your best track yet. Great mic precense, great flow and solid lyrics. Well done. Good hook too
Thanks mang. Got my shit on lock down now fo sho. Thanks for the review.
Please contact me if you would like to use this in a project. We can discuss the details.