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Mar 9, 2009 | 9:40 PM EDT
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1.9 MB
2 min 7 sec
2.83 / 5.00

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Author Comments

A poem I wrote that I attempted to make into a song back in September of 08. I created this within a half hour, very impromptu everything. I wish I could sing but I can't and I'm sorry for the audio level being low. But if anyone wishes to redo this go ahead. Please send a link if you do.

Depending on how things go in my life I may create some guitar loops. I'm just tired of that fake sounding midi stuff.

And lyrics.

"Excuses and comforting lies.
Can help those unwilling to accept truth.
Those who are unready for reality.

Excuses and comforting lies.
Can help those unwilling to accept the proof.
Those who wish to show no frailty.

Both are stuck in reality.
Both can see possibility.

But saying this does not,
fix the damage.

But knowing this can't stop,
nor trick the savage.

Oh, what a monster I've become.
Oh, so much that cannot be undone.

Caught between worlds,
like a two-edged sword,
I cut through both,
til the hole is so big,
there can be no hope,
leaving only the empty rip.

Tears and disgruntled cries.
Is all thats left from the reality trip.
My name should be sin.

Tears and disgruntled cries.
Theres nothing left for anyone to get a grip.
And I should be shunned.

For there is no ascension,
for the monster I've become."


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