I'm so glad you PM'd me about this song. I just love it. When I first heard the mini version of it I was hoping you would extend it and I'm so glad you did. xD To me it still sounds like a Malice Mizer type song, and I mean that in a good way. I find this song original and has a unique haunting feeling about it. Anyway, good song, I could never hate this.
Good stuff overall.
The song is good, but the higher synth parts can be a bit abrasive and the abruptness of the harmony notes towards the beginning detracts from the melody. I like the other new parts you added into it and they melded very well with the melody, the progression is interesting (in a good way). The only real problem I have is with that high-pitched assault early on. Keep up the good work!
LOL! fairground much?
you can not really improve this song. although it needs balancing a little (the channels make some sounds heavier, and the bass is overpowering...i think lol)
a lovely "um-pa-pa" rhythm. truly unusual. but very original. LOL. really enjoyable. very terrifying. sounds like it should be in a fairground, maybe a haunted house?
the chord sequence suggests some kind of innocence, however the dischordance and minor moods, move it in a heavy and daunting direction...
Please contact me if you would like to use this in a project. We can discuss the details.