This song was a spur of the moment creation, but I'm happy with the sound that came out. I had some more trouble with mastering it because of my average quality programs (either that or just my inability to use them). This song is about the underdogs of life, people who are hated just for being who they are, just like how everybody else is. Unlike all my other work, this was done from start to finish in less than a month, and when you consider that I don't have time to work on anything on weekdays, this easily could have been done in just one week's time. Because the quality's a little bad, I might redo this one along with all my others that need remastering in the future. Enjoy. :)
The lyrics are:
What do you think I am?
What have I ever done
To you
Or anybody else?
Who do you think we are?
We are people too
Like you
And Everybody Else.
She wants to be loved and
Not feel so broken
Someone to hold her
But nobody cares
Just cause she's different
But why is she different?
Her heart beats the same as
Everyone else
Why can't you love her?
You think you're better
How are you better?
Well nobody cares
Now she is crying
Now she is dying
Isn't she just like
Everyone else?
What do you think I am?
What have I ever done
To you
Or anybody else?
Who do you think we are?
We are people too
Like you
And Everybody Else.
He's just a boy
Without a home
Another victim
All alone
His mother fears
What she has done
His father never
Had a son
There's only darkness
Deep inside
Where all his life
He had to hide
Now he's headed
Straight to hell
For being just like
Everyone else.
What do you think I am?
What have I ever done
To you
Or anybody else?
Who do you think we are?
We are people too
Like you
And Everybody Else.
What's all this hatred for?
We don't care anymore
That you're
Unhappy with yourself
And when this life is through
We'll still be standing too
Like you
Don't cry
You'll make it someday
I will come
And take you away
For now
You must be strong
Just wait
It won't be long
What do you think I am?
What have I ever done
To you
Or anybody else?
Who do you think we are?
We are people too
Like you
And Everybody Else.
What's all this hatred for?
We don't care anymore
That you're
Unhappy with yourself
And when this life is through
We'll still be standing too
Like you
And everybody else
Nice voice
The voice in this is really solid you can see how much energy you bring to the track itself it's a nice touch with the extra sounds you hot coming thru I wouldn't mind more background effects like unique sounds that pop in there from time to time that offer a twist of things but besides that this was a pretty solid track you have here anyways love it
~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
More background effect sounds
~X~
I'm pretty much in love with this song. Would it be okay, if I borrowed it away and used it in my series? ^.^
That would be absolutely fine, and I would love to see your series afterwards!
the boy's story reminds me of my chiledhood. but i'm doing good now great volcles.
That's good that you're doing ok, I actually had specific scenarios in mind when I wrote the individuals. Maybe I was thinking of yours or close to it.
Very powerful message
And tastefully portrayed.
The lyrics are so very well chosen, and the way you chose to present everything was very nicely done :)
Thank you, this is kinda my less worthy song imo, so I'm glad you liked it out of all of my songs.
What!?!?
3.84? Much too low. This sounds like radio quality music (all except for the vocal quality, but it's good that you plan to fix that). I get zero bombed a lot, and i've left NG and came back about four times, so i share the same problem. Except for my songs don't have nearly as many votes, listens, downloads, or views as yours.
Another great song, 5/5 and 10/10. Screw the vocal quality. The rest of the song makes up for it ;)
Thanks for making me feel like this song still has merit. I can't wait to make it sound better.
Please contact me if you would like to use this in a project. We can discuss the details.
Cayler 
