it felt out of time
which means its doesn't blend into the background very well and it isn't particularly ambient.
I'm not keen on the voices either, thats just ersonal taste, so sorry but yeah.
The things coming in and out so often made it a little too jumpy. The wah sound was a little too harsh i beleive.
i liked the snaps and tings, made me think of a clock. A nice idea for this song might be to consider taking some things that sound everyday,, eg a clock then building the song up aroudn that, adding more and more layers. It would improve the sogn greatly in my view if it slowly built up rtaher than jumped through textures. Its not a bad effort, i just don't think its particularly fanatastic either. Kepp trying though man.
good! a review! thanks for the tips, i am not having much time to make musics and learn all the stuffs of fruity loops, be sure i'll keep trying ;)