Great

Not bad at all!

Very sad

May I use this in a piece I'm doing? With credit of course

Beautiful song

The hero is in space above Earth after the final battle. He managed to live after the battle but he wasn't finished. He tells his friends, family, the world, and his love to take care. The hero uses the last of his remaining power to purify the Earth of disease, pollution, etc. "My destiny is fufilled." as he fades away. This music is perfect for that scene. Keep up the good work.

Wow

A very relaxing,calm and (at least to me) sad melody. It feels like the kind of song you would hear when the hero sacrifces him/herself for the greather good or dies after the final battle. If I may ask what were you thinking about when you wrote this and/or what dose this song say to you?
Great job I look foward to your future work!

REVERB!!!

You added reverb, or made it more apparent. Right? Because it seems like you did in this version anyways. It gives it a little richer flavor.

As with the first version, this is structured very nicely. PERCUSSION!!! I just lost my train of thought when the percussion kicked in! GREAT idea sir! I love the percussion all the way through. Very tasteful indeed! And it created a new layer to this song that was truly missing.

Now, that being said, IT STILL NEEDS AN OBOE! I will not back down from my oboe! ;-) Yea, I can so hear an oboe in this piece. Something light and airy. God I think it would be nearly perfect with an oboe. You should put heavy reverb on the oboe if you do. At least that is my opinion. I think it would sound best if it sounded very distant and light.

This has greatly improved from version one. I'm am seriously impressed with this composition now. I really love it!

4/5 and 9/10 overall. It is just missing that something.....what is it.......OH YA! AN OBOE! ;-)

-Gravey-