Smashing!
Its a lot better! Just need to lower the volume of the vocals it over overs powers the sound in the background.
But overall m8! You are on the road to success!
Author Comments
a shortended version of my world (original) - http://www.newgroun ds.com/audio/listen/21869 0
with improvements like:
- shorter opening (thanks Dynamide :D)
- shorter build up
- improved ending
lyrics:
- i love to
- let it go in
- my life
- my world
- i love to
- feel the freedom in
- my life
- my world
- i love the
- music in
- my life
- my world
- i love the
- people near me in
- my life
- my world
and enjoy :D
good
pretty good one!
The parts with the lyrics are cool,
but should be more long,
AND, have more lyrics.
really good song
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