as for the drowning

try changing the octive of the bass or drums if they contrast enough they may stand out more. its pretty nice man but my headphones crackled hear and their probably just newgrounds or my headphones though, and this is def a loop

Pretty sweet track man.

True what the guy below said though. You need to lower the volume of the bass or remaster it and set up some frequency boundaries.

Cool slicing of the beats. Wub on that sub bass is sweet, but it kinda gets at your ears after a while. Okay, now the beats are getting a bit repetitve... that is one major problem. Usually the drums are the main focus in dnb songs. If you don't have variety on the drums, then the song is going to get dull and boring.

The progression of the basses are pretty cool, but a little bit more effort on some variation would help, honestly, but the sequencing was pretty hawt. Just enough repetition to get some main ideas flowing in and out. Very nice. You did pretty well. Awesome mate.

~[IZK]

Drums are drowning

You should make the beat louder its getting beat down by your bass.

HEY

Love you piece of music, really suited your topic.

First love the melody but wish u put more into the drums
the bass is over takiing everything but love it anywayz

Continue to make beats dude peace...