not a bad attempt
needs to be slightly heavier beats plus the song needs a real break in it something to get the braincells moving. where you're current version ends is probably where you should build on this. maybe keep the first 1 min 30 secs as it is then release the heavy bass. i also recommend an under lying bass line.
this is nice man
keep up the hardstyle man!
and check out my songs
thx, but i actually need a bit of help makin it :P