AMZING AS ALWAYS and i would freaking die to have you come and sing in my Metal Opera Perfect Timeline. Especially with these kind of vocals for my first cd of the album cause the first album is all about time traveling O.o
You know, I like it. Granted, I've seen you writing the songs that follow, and I know that the feel of this song really comes through with Part 2 following it. I do think that some sort of ambiance near the end, very quiet, would be good, just as something to lead into part 2. But, other than that, good work man. Vocals are superb, the effects work really well, and the feel of the track really got through to me.
I liked it...
Vocals were good and I might understand why some others wouldn't like it. It sounds like something Phil Collins might make. Hope the next parts of this are just as cool and maintain to theme, only building on it.
I don't normally respond to reviews but I thought I would with this one mostly because of the comparison to Phil, whose music I actually enjoy, ironically.
I actually took a heavy influence for this song from Pink Floyd's album "A Momentary Lapse of Reason." Specifically the tracks, A New Machine (Part 1) and A New Machine (Part 2). Should you listen to those, you'll probably find that while I'm in a different key, they're pretty similar, musically.
It doesn't help that I'm an effects whore and Fruity Loops introduced a Vocoder into later versions.
Anyways, glad you enjoyed, appreciate the review.
i like the lyrics but if you want a sense of loneliness without making the song boring try adding ambient sounds like a orch. but um i like the vocal just make it more of a song. it doesn't desirve to get blammed so i gave it a 3/5.
Appreciate the review. Particularly the honesty.
Unfortunately I can't take what you say too heavily into consideration because the point of the track is it's not supposed to be much of a "song" per-se. Actually this part is meant to be more of an intro into the next part of the "Reality" songs which is meant to be the polar opposite of this song, musically (IE guitar, bass, drums, etc.).