strange about the guitar... i can't put my figner on it, are you in the right key? Maybe its just i'm used to a phrase starting on the root?
I don't know. I like the feel of this song, but it just feels a bit off. And theres too many logn melodic gaps. Filling more of these with guitar melody like you begin withwould be great.
teh strumming osunds a little off as well, are they the right chord choices, they just don't quite sound right...
There some really nice phrase choices in here, you've obviously got an ear for what yu want to make, it just needs a bit of refining.
Good luck in the future, sorry if my review felt a little vague , i do like the song, it just has a few places that bug me, which really pull it down. Keep up the stuff though, its got potential to be great.
Ah, thank you for the response. I am still improving this song, as it is one of my favorites. I have improved a lot since i first made this, and I will be updateing it in the near future. Thank you for your constructive critisim, and I hope you review more of my audio!
Please contact me if you would like to use this in a project. We can discuss the details.