that just hurts. your other ones are better, guess you're improving.
needs more work into it. no offence but i did my first compo when i was 10 and its better. im reeeaaaally sure you are able to do better than this. also, dont just stick to one DAW. try another one. (i use reason now. i dont know why but i really like reason better than fl studio.) anyways, yeah im pretty sure you could and can do better in the near future...just assuming you are serious about this. probably not.
Ya, and it's your first piece of shit too...
That was HORRIBLE! It sounds, well, like you just hit an assortment of keys... Plus loops should be at least 20 seconds long... and it didn't even loop well. I'm a 15 year old artist myself, but my shit's WAY BETTER than what you have here... but your a beginner. So you need to PRACTICE PRACTICE PRACTICE before you even consider to submit your stuff to Newgrounds. That's what I did. I think you should do the same, because if Audio could get blammed... yours woulda been blammed when it hit "the shelves" so to speak...
i'll keep on practicing in the corner of my cell