not bad =-).
First and formost i think i came off as a little vain after reading my last review to the song after this one wich is what i was trying to do. My meaning was basicly this, Now that i've listened to the song i can tell it deserved a good score. =)
Now, on to this song. Its a bit short for sure and repetitive but for a loop i got to say its pretty nice. Very fun to listen to and i could hear this in a game or something =).
Keep up the good work.
Lots of loops in the house section! This will be another easy review for me.
I think what this song is lacking in something different. Not talking about diversity since only a 30 second song, but your heaven pad sounds too generic. It is playing that common pattern trance uses except trance puts the bass to that pattern. I know what you did with the sidechaining is the norm of particular subgenres of house, but I heard it enough to be kinda bored at it.
As for the bass, it sounds good. The pattern seems quite catchy. I also like your drums. I don't know if your xylophone sounding instrument is actually an instrument or drums. Anyway, great job on that.
5/5 and 9/10 review.
Bye for now
You have some pretty good points here. It's a bit on the generic side but I think I can get away with that with a good mixdown and some good progressions in the song. Anyway I pretty much completely redid the mix, I'd like you to take a second listen. And btw the xylophone sound is a FM pluck, I made it from scratch somehow... trial and error really :P
Thanks for the review
you blow me away when u make songs i got generic loop highest peaks bluest oceans and this in my ipod nano you make me do this AHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH HHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH IM CRAZY FOR GOOD MUSIC GRAGHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH
Please contact me if you would like to use this in a project. We can discuss the details.