it's very good
Definitely not bad!
You did a good job with this. Lots of variation to keep it interesting. I don't have much else to say... Oh, I knocked off a point because after a while it gets repetitive, but it's not a very big issue here.
Keep it up!
Ya repetition was an issue back then and is still a bit of an issue now! Hey but thanks for actually giving me some pointers! The only flaw with newgrounds is that people don't write anything unless what they hear is "life changing!" It really makes it hard to get to that point. Anywho, Im rambling so thanks again!