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Mar 2, 2009 | 12:34 AM EST
File Info
2.4 MB
2 min 6 sec
3.95 / 5.00

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Rated 3.95 / 5 stars
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448 Plays | 48 Downloads
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Electronic - Trance

Author Comments

This is just the beggining. my first ever submission =]


oh ya and i did this in like a half an hour so dont be to mean on the comments =p



Rated 4.5 / 5 stars

Hi S.... Umm pneumatic

So I read the past reviewers. They seem to have a point. Your instruments sound a bit generic to me. I think the EQ may not be a big issue for this type of song..but your instruments need a face lift. I remember when I first used to love that trance lead when starting to make electronic music. Eventually you realize that it isn't as good as you thought it was. Your kicks seem pretty good. Using them in another song sounds like a good idea.

Your going to need to do some automation work. There is no filter changes, panning, delay, and imaging. Also note that the fuzziness to the instruments may be popular on NG, but outside of NG it tells the listener that the EQing was roughly done. If your going for this kind of fuzz music than by all means EQ like you did for this song. However, if your looking to expand into new ideas, EQ should be the first area to work on. I'm still learning too.

Lastly, mix it up with the notation. Try some 1/16, 1/32, half notes, etc...basically try some off beat stuff to increase the diversity. Like VeX said, I also tell you this for good reasons. Your getting better.
5/5 and 9/10 review
Bye for now

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Rated 3.5 / 5 stars

Not bad

Ur good at makin melodies and throwin down a quit beat. but there is no sequential flow to this song.. just seems like loop after loop. when instead each section should flow musically. and the EQ levels are exaggerated and the volume levels clip. I'm gonna super criticize all your songs on this NG account. But I do it outa love ^^. keep workin hard :)

Pneumatic responds:

ya i seem to be having problems with makeing actual songs =[ i like makeing the melodys though. i think i might be looking for a partner for more advanced music making =]


Rated 2.5 / 5 stars

Not bad

For a first try.
good pressure on the kick and the bassline was cool.
but the second half of the song dissapointed me, the bassline disappeared and the song got boring, didnt quite like the melody, a little too simple and nothing special about it at all.

Still, this is a good beginning to a song, give it some more time and i think you can get this alot better.

Good luck!


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