Hmm...
Well...
+ = Good
- = Should look into
+/- Good, but it needs some inproving.
+The transactions were great!
+The hihats were nice...
-The kick. i didn't like it at all, change it to one with less of a tail (if you know what i mean)
+The piano at around 2:40 was nice, i like its smoothness.
+/- You should do something with the pad, like side-chaining it.
Well, there you go!