Haha, highly entertaining song.
This song actually gave me a small laugh. It's high energy and highly playful nature is very apparent in this piece. For a first track, I must say this is very impressive as it immediately caused an emotional reaction; that is a very rare quality to come by.
Perhaps why it caused me to laugh a bit was perhaps the very beginning of the piece made it seem as if a story was being told in a very strange quality. While that quality disappears later in the long and some of the notes simply do not match at all. Still, it gave a very entertaining sensation listening to this song.
9 out of 10, you've really captured that playful sensation when it comes to music.
P.S. I sent you a private message, you might want to give it a look whenever you have the time.
=] read the message bro, that was some good stuff. I gotta make some new stuff to put up thats actually new, not just that i finally uploaded. See if i can learn anything haha.
Yeah i guess you could say im a playful person, maybe it just comes out in music. Hmm did the drums bother you at all? My sis said during the fast part she had trouble picking it up, wasnt sure if the highhats were too loud or somethin.
=] thx again my main critiquin man. if ya got any buds who could give a decent opinion feel free to show em my stuff.. ya know, if your bored and theyr into that ; ) haha