A nice heavy track, great beat, clear sound quality, wellfitting effects for the dark melody this plays, can't seem to find any flaws with it, sounds great, lots of variation, and a nice buildup too, keep up the great work!
Well done, but overdone.
While this song is definitely interesting, captivating, and has really nice rhythm to it, the technique is simply overdone by just about every other techno/trance/dance/industrial artist here on Newgrounds. You definitely have the skills to produce the songs, but I would aim to create more of your own unique musical "flavor" that tips outside of the standard and typical forms of this genre.
Yeah, I agree. The thing is, though, I find if I "try" too hard to be unique, it doesn't work. I usually don't plan my songs, they just come out. There was an industrial song I made last year that was more unique (well, in my opinion) called "Born Victims". You could always check that one out.
And thanks for the review. :)