It's ok...

By posting your music on newgrounds, I know you want to know what people think about your music. I'm not trying to flame it with this review, I'm just trying to help you out with advice. The instruments are nicely picked. I would use those kind of instruments in one of my songs. However, you are lacking musical melody. You can't just string together a bunch of notes and call it a song. You have to combine the same notes with matching chords. you didn't with this song and it sounded more like noise than music. You also need to spend more time on making your music. If it takes you 3 months to make a song, then let it take 3 months. Check out my music and "The Spirits Within" by my other username Saint Isaiah. listen to the melodies and use it as a teaching tool. Good luck. I gave this piece a 3/5. Keep trying man.

-Saint
www.SaintIsaiah.com