The flanger / phaser whatever the fuck it is your using over the guitars is really ruining it.
The guitars: im guessing 2 things. You're using a distortion and going directly line in, and your guitars are clipping.
Easy ways to fix this: turn the recording volume down. Get an impulse loader. It's a simple VST that loads impulses from famous amps, and emulates these. This will take away that annoying fuzz in the guitar.
Another great tip for great sounding metal guitars:
Record the rhythm guitar twice, pan one recording HARD to the left, the other HARD to the right.. try it out.
Dude. Much thanks. ur info proved way more than helpful. thank u. :)
I'm not sure how I feel about this song; I see a lot of really good parts in it! But I say take off the heavy distortion! That is in no way Rock'in!
thank u for the input. lol yea my recording quality kinda over distorts my guitar. but thank u for the input man.