Probably could have tightened it up a bit
A nice beat, overall i liked it but there were a few notes that seemed played out of the beat or natural rythm flow. In other words there were a few "clunky moments". It is a unique beat and I hope someday to be able to emulate the subtle variations that add that extra turn in the rythm. Grins to you.
One and only, MrDrunk