I hate you
You're too good! XD
Now that it is said, to the song. The "melody thing" is trully catchy, yet annoying at a certain point of repetition. However it did kept my in to the end. This futiristic calm effect this song procure is very enjoyable! Like you're in a giant futuristic metropolis.
just a few things...
if you put the first sound that you hear ( not the bass, but the melody thing) , to the background more, it's reapeating and all, and the bass changes..... and my brains start to hurt if something got reapeated a lot ( just me personal). but that was only in the beginning , after the repeating part it starts sounding great and cool ....
this is a good start and it has my attention personally i think it needs to lead up to some hard hittin beats its to ambient but if thats what your goin for it sounds good the symbols help break it up, this song has a good foundation just build it up and use your originality and you will have a nice pice!
Please contact me if you would like to use this in a project. We can discuss the details.